This sounds like something a college Freshman would write in an introductory English composition class- including incomplete sentences. Expository writing is only useful if real information is imparted. Here, we are offered only a single statistic as it changed through time. I can think of a million other relevant ideas to touch on that would not only facilitate dialog, but would also help inform the public, As for your grammar, well, really, if you are going to blog, you should have higher standards.
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This sounds like something a college Freshman would write in an introductory English composition class- including incomplete sentences. Expository writing is only useful if real information is imparted. Here, we are offered only a single statistic as it changed through time. I can think of a million other relevant ideas to touch on that would not only facilitate dialog, but would also help inform the public, As for your grammar, well, really, if you are going to blog, you should have higher standards.
May 28, 2009 - 11:33pmThis Comment
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